Love hurts
Here comes my second 'Kirukal' ( first one in the previous post ). Professional Poets, pls bear with me.
என்னை நிறைய நேசிப்பவர்களே
என்னை நிறைய காயப்படுத்துகிறார்கள்
நான் காயப்படும்போது
நிறைய வறுத்தப்படுவதும் அவர்களே!!!!
Who ever reads this, pls leave your valuable comments to help me to improve my poetry skills.
posted by Queen @ 11:27 PM
8 Comments:
Love doesnt hurt except when too much expectation is carried along with it. When there are expectations, either of the involved party gets hurt and the other feels guilty coz he/she thinks the pain caused is because of him/her...even though they played no part in it.
But thats just me and I might be wrong.
Cheers
M.
Schrodingers Cat:I totally agree with you. And the sub-text of that kavithai is what you have explained here. This is what exactly i meant to say. Thanks for ur comment.
Hi
I read the english verse of the poem here
http://rasigamagic.wordpress.com/2006/10/08/treasure/
is that also ur blog?
Satu: I was totally surprised seeing that english version, it exactly means the same as my kavithai, but the second part is slightly different. Nice Catch.Thats not my blog, but the poems there are nice.
Thanks for your comments :) Now that am getting new friends,Will try to blog more regularly.
நல்லா இருக்குங்க இந்த கவிதை.
தொடர்ந்து எழுதுங்க. விமர்சிக்க வருகின்றேன்.
:)
Princess: Thank you :) Keep commenting
Nagai Siva: Kandippa thodarnthu eluthuven. Thanks for your comments.
i remember reading something like this long back in blog world.
the same poem was written as " theenal suddu " you had used காயப்படுத்துகிறார்கள்
not to hurt you or offend you - when i read this - i remembered the one i read long back.
Good one.. keep it going.. But kaayapaduthiya pin varuthapattu enna payan? theeyinaal sutta pun ullaarum, patchey aaritillaa naavinaal sutta vadu.. ;o)
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